Should Government give Free healthcare or Should Citizen pay for private insurance
There is 264 million people in Indonesia ,
it spread all over the Indonesia from Sabang till Marauke . Free healthcare is
one of the way to solve people problem from getting disease, plague, and virus.
But with 264 million people in Indonesia
I don’t think we have enough resources to do that , and in this essay I will
talk about why government can’t Fund free health and it better to people having
private insurance.
For the first paragraph we will talk in
Economic Side , is it possible for Government to do free healthcare?. Based on
the data , in 2018 Indonesia have Rp. 10.843 trillion based on BPS (Badan Pusat
Statistik) and the average price for the health insurance is Rp.100.000/people/
month so the government should pay a lot of money and it only for a month, and
it only for healthcare . With that money we can allocate that to other like
Build better infrastructure.
For the second paragraph I will talk about the
procedure if Government giving free health insurance. As we know Indonesia have
a health insurance called BPJS that can give free treatment for people. But the
procedure for claim that insurance is really complicated. First you should go
to the Puskesmas, and if the Puskesmas can’t treat the the illness you must
request for referral letter to the hospital , and because a lot of people using
BPJS you must wait until your turn. And with that complicated procedure for
claiming BPJS I will suggest people to use private Insurance
For the third paragraph I will tell about
How a health insurance can used for corruption. Because a lot of people that
want to use free health insurance which is BPJS
, so the government should spend a lot of money to giving health
insurance , and with that a lot of money , it can giving opportunity for
corruption. And it happen in 2018 Head of Health Department arrested because of
Corruption BPJS Funds for Puskesmas that
harm the country for billion rupiah , imagine with that money we can improve
our country from Infrastructure or Education.
For the fourth paragraph I will give my
counter argument, in the Indonesian Constitution allign 4 it said People should
Treat and Protect their people , it means government should protect and treat
their people and it also include their health. So Free Healthcare is one of the
way government can do for treating their people.
Outline
Introduction
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There is 264 million people in Indonesia , it spread
all over the Indonesia from Sabang till Marauke . Free healthcare is one of
the way to solve people problem from getting disease, plague, and virus. But
with 264 million people in Indonesia I
don’t think we have enough resources to do that , and in this essay I will
talk about why government can’t Fund free health and it better to people
having private insurance.
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Argument 1
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Economy side if government
giving health insurance
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Argument 2
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The procedure for claim
health insurance
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Argument 3
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Opportunities for corruption
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Counter Argument
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Based on the Indonesia
Constitution, country should protect and care their people
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Conclusion
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Summary of all the argument
and Sollution
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It's nice explanation Indra! I think it's better the out line put at the top of the essay. Good Job
ReplyDeleteGood essay. I think there's no mistake here
ReplyDeleteOutline should be place at the top, not the bottom
ReplyDeletethis is good!
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