Monday, July 1, 2019

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Introduction and Thesis statement
As we know Internet has become human needs, now every almost everything is available at internet. But do you know beside internet can give you many benefit but it can also become a loss. Before we talk about advantages and disadvantges of Internet I will little bit explain about internet. Internet is found at 1969 by US military as their project called ARPANET.  Now in this essay I will tell about the Advantages of Internet and it’s disadventages.

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Advantages
-          Make easier and possible to talk with people that far away
-          Easy to spread the information
-          Every knowledge is available at Internet
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Disadvantages

-          Cyber crime
-          Porn Website
-          Addicted to Internet
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Conclusion
And that is the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. Internet is really useful but if you stick to it for too long it will become a loss for you because something that excessive is not good. Parent also have the job to monitoring their children for not playing internet for too long because that is not good for their health and their future.


The Advantages and Disadvantage of Internet



As we know Internet has become human needs, now every almost everything is available at internet. But do you know beside internet can give you many benefit but it can also become a loss. Before we talk about advantages and disadvantges of Internet I will little bit explain about internet. Internet is found at 1969 by US military as their project called ARPANET.  Now in this essay I will tell about the Advantages of Internet and it’s disadventages.

First Internet can make your work easier, a long years ago if you want to talk or apprise about your condition to the people who far from your place, you must to write a letter and send it to the Post Office. But now the condition has different since the Internet become faster and easier to use now you can talk and also now you can Face call with someone who far from your place using many application. Second Advantages easy to find information. With the Internet now we can know what happen in other place , no matter how far you are now you can easily find the news about other country condition on the Internet. And third advantages is now all knowledge that you want know is available in Internet , like you want to learn math you can find all of the formula and the solution in Internet , now learn can become easier because of internet.

Beside of the many benefit that can Internet give it can also giving the loss. First advantages is Cyber crime, cyber crime is a crime that the criminals doing the crime by using Internet. For example they hack some website company to get profit like money and information. Second disadvantages is porn, now because of the Internet can be used by almost all of the people from young and old, porn website is now can be accessed easily. Third disadvantages is now people become addicted to the internet especially to game, game is fun to do but if you are playing it for too long that is not good for your health because it can damage your eye , not good for you environment because you never go out from home and you don’t have any friend because you only want to playing game in your room.

And that is the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. Internet is really useful but if you stick to it for too long it will become a loss for you because something that excessive is not good. Parent also have the job to monitoring their children for not playing internet for too long because that is not good for their health and their future.

4 comments:

  1. Are you sure using “And” in the first sentence

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  2. "Place I want to visit" is that the tittle ? If not, why dont you add one for example "The Internet" maybe

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