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Introduction and Thesis statement
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As we know Internet has become human needs, now
every almost everything is available at internet. But do you know beside
internet can give you many benefit but it can also become a loss. Before we
talk about advantages and disadvantges of Internet I will little bit explain
about internet. Internet is found at 1969 by US military as their project called
ARPANET. Now in this essay I will tell
about the Advantages of Internet and it’s disadventages.
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2nd Paragraph
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Advantages
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Make easier and possible to
talk with people that far away
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Easy to spread the
information
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Every knowledge is available
at Internet
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3rd Paragraph
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Disadvantages
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Cyber crime
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Porn Website
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Addicted to Internet
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4th Paragraph
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Conclusion
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And that is the advantages and disadvantages of the
Internet. Internet is really useful but if you stick to it for too long it
will become a loss for you because something that excessive is not good.
Parent also have the job to monitoring their children for not playing
internet for too long because that is not good for their health and their
future.
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The Advantages and Disadvantage of Internet
As we know Internet has become human needs,
now every almost everything is available at internet. But do you know beside
internet can give you many benefit but it can also become a loss. Before we
talk about advantages and disadvantges of Internet I will little bit explain
about internet. Internet is found at 1969 by US military as their project called
ARPANET. Now in this essay I will tell
about the Advantages of Internet and it’s disadventages.
First Internet can make your work easier, a
long years ago if you want to talk or apprise about your condition to the
people who far from your place, you must to write a letter and send it to the
Post Office. But now the condition has different since the Internet become
faster and easier to use now you can talk and also now you can Face call with
someone who far from your place using many application. Second Advantages easy
to find information. With the Internet now we can know what happen in other
place , no matter how far you are now you can easily find the news about other
country condition on the Internet. And third advantages is now all knowledge
that you want know is available in Internet , like you want to learn math you
can find all of the formula and the solution in Internet , now learn can become
easier because of internet.
Beside of the many benefit that can
Internet give it can also giving the loss. First advantages is Cyber crime,
cyber crime is a crime that the criminals doing the crime by using Internet.
For example they hack some website company to get profit like money and
information. Second disadvantages is porn, now because of the Internet can be
used by almost all of the people from young and old, porn website is now can be
accessed easily. Third disadvantages is now people become addicted to the
internet especially to game, game is fun to do but if you are playing it for
too long that is not good for your health because it can damage your eye , not
good for you environment because you never go out from home and you don’t have
any friend because you only want to playing game in your room.
And that is the advantages and
disadvantages of the Internet. Internet is really useful but if you stick to it
for too long it will become a loss for you because something that excessive is
not good. Parent also have the job to monitoring their children for not playing
internet for too long because that is not good for their health and their
future.
Are you sure using “And” in the first sentence
ReplyDelete"Place I want to visit" is that the tittle ? If not, why dont you add one for example "The Internet" maybe
ReplyDeleteI think this tittle its wrong
ReplyDeleteYou put the wrong title bro
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